Cool! Very emotive and interesting! The second person is neat and flows nicely!
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Very unique! I love the way you describe the fight-or-flight that the main character is feeling, and how we get a look into their thoughts here and there, up to the point it distracts them. I like that you didn't drag out a scene that needed to be short and punchy like this. Thank you for participating, I hope to see you in the next one :)
lol Thank you so much. It was fun. I'll see if I can do this again next time around.
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Pretty cool!