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    Your thoughts please.

    Posted by Okidou - 1 day ago


    Please give me your thoughts and interpretations on the haiku below.

    You may comment below or PM me. Whichever you prefer.

    There are no wrong answers.


    But, I wonder what I saw.

    Quiet as it is.

    And tomorrow felt as much.


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    I like the first two lines but the last one, the third one, feels out of place. It doesn't really match with what the first two lines are trying to describe.